So touching and so true!

Hey finally a new poem! not your strongest but it's pretty good

Pretty dang good! I loved this stanza the best:

You continue to give
A piece of your heart
And all you receive
Is worlds torn apart

I think on your last stanza you can put something like this:

It is you against the world
Don't forget to save your self
You really have to let go...
You can't save the world alone.

I think it would go great with your title at then end.. But other than that you did an amazing job!

Excellent

5/5

-Thanks for the comment-