Wow this poem way too deep for
me but i know good writting when i read it.

It's diffrent, I like it, but not too sure what else to think of it...?

chrissi

Hmm. Thats right 'hmm'. I don't know that I liked that as much as your other works. Its very cynical... And yet true, so thats probably why I don't like it that much. It is very much a poem about life. I think, for me there was too much truth, your work is so honest and this piece is so easy to interpret. I like your vaguer pieces. I like the combination of drugs and life... It really does work. It seems as though the narrator is from above but...not God, so it seems a little scary or intimidating... You messed with my head. A job well done :)

This poem is amazing...i usually dont like poems that dont rhyme but this one just drawed me in..it's so deep..i loved it.5/5