I don't know what should be the title but nonetheless, it's practically good. It's like you love him and yet you feel that you don't, the girl is undecided...confused. And most of the time, i'm like that. Pretty good!

I really liked it, the poem reached out to me and told me this came from your heart. Good job.
Jamie

How abt "Gone Forever"...just a view.

well this is really very nicely written poem

all the best and take care
5/5