Comments : Singing from Hopelessness

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael

    One last poem...I swear!

    Anyways, this poem is of a tale (if not understood correctly) of how a small group of children wake up in a iron wasteland. They have fun and like to venture, but a woman sings to keep the children in the world they live in. She sings because she doesn't want them to know of their once beloved town lies in peices...quiet sad though...:'(

    So, please comment and enjoy!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Sad, but great! 5/5