Thunder Calls

by debbylyn   Jan 3, 2007


Thunder swells, torrents abound
Secret fears I've battened down
Fluid tears of ecstasy
Raindrops fall to comfort me

False love lost, held no repent
Tainted soul, last lament
Tortured heart and spirit too
Storm clouds lining skies of blue

Left with gray to color all
Welcome teardrops when they fall
Shadows cast on brilliant hue
Resigned my lot, my bitter brew

Recant the past as thunder calls
Memories dark dishevel all
Lost brief love, trust ablaze
Last bequest on stormy wave

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW awesome poem, wonderfully written and word choice was great I loved it , great job my friend:::::
    Left with gray to color all
    Welcome teardrops when they fall
    Shadows cast on brilliant hue
    Resigned my lot, my bitter brew
    you did a wonderful job , a pleasure reading it
    your friend Tracy d. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The description was like no other that i have read. well done and keep reading. i will comment and vote.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    4.3!!! rubbish! ...tortured heart....
    I would vote 10 if I could. Perhaps they can't read....you have to be kind to the blind.....

    beautiful write...I just can't get over the family talent!! Love your style....
    just look at the comments...
    does that not say all. 10!!!!
    Thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hope

    Really good work... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hope

    Really good work... 5/5

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