Comments : Thunder Calls

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie,
    how beautiful your words.
    you amaze me everytime you write
    your words pour out like a birds morning song.
    this is a wonderful write
    Bravo! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    This is really great, good job.
    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem debbie, 5/5!!! just a suggestion though add an (a) befor stormy in the last sentence, but still an excellent poem, 5/5 i got to say it runs in the family, all your family writes very good too.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Yet another fantastic poem by a Awesome poet. The flow and the strucutre were great. Keep on writting, you are truely a great poet.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    WOW! WOW! WOW! I can't truly tell you how amazing this poem was! If I could rate higher than five I would. I love poems relating feelings to rain and thunder, but so often, it lacks power and emotion, but this didn't at all! This was truly truly amazing! It's beautiful!!! Thank you Thank you for sharing this. Beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautiful words, flow and imagery. Well done! I could read this over and over.........

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    GREAT POEM. AWESOME WORDS MY FAVORITE OF YOUR YET!

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    Aww that's awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I don't know how this got voted to a 4.3 beacause it is definetly a 5. When people down vote you, they should leave their critique...maybe they didn't understand it LOL!

  • 17 years ago

    by Danni

    I really liked this. good write! 5/5
    lyl~Danni~

  • 17 years ago

    by Hope

    Really good work... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hope

    Really good work... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    4.3!!! rubbish! ...tortured heart....
    I would vote 10 if I could. Perhaps they can't read....you have to be kind to the blind.....

    beautiful write...I just can't get over the family talent!! Love your style....
    just look at the comments...
    does that not say all. 10!!!!
    Thanks!

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    The description was like no other that i have read. well done and keep reading. i will comment and vote.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW awesome poem, wonderfully written and word choice was great I loved it , great job my friend:::::
    Left with gray to color all
    Welcome teardrops when they fall
    Shadows cast on brilliant hue
    Resigned my lot, my bitter brew
    you did a wonderful job , a pleasure reading it
    your friend Tracy d. 5/5