Comments : Hey Mr. Bartender

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    You need to clean up the funky smybols where your ' should be.

    when I first started reading this poem you had me greatly worried hun. Your last stanza was a very welcomed one. I hope you're okay hun, if not you know where to find me

    Much Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Robyn

    This was a very interesting poem at first i did not know wat to think of it but i hope everything is k with u have not talked to u in awhile i still here if u ever need to talk
    take care hun
    robyn xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Hey, Cody i really miss you, this was a great poem at first i was like ok...where is this poem going (sounded like a strippers club) XD but at the end i realized what it was about and i love this poem. Talk to you soon ( I hope ) XOX Ur lil sis Roxy!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Torn

    Ah cody i miss you. i dont write anymore but u gotta add me on myspace or something ok?!
    like jenn, i was worried when i first read this.. although i loved the truth to it all. i hope you're ok.
    love love love xoxooxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    That's great. I LOVE it (like I always do), and I appreicate all comments cuz I have 4 new poems (lol), but anyway, let's not get off topic! You're a great writer, and ALL your poems take the reader on a trip... IT'S GREAT! I love when you get new poems! Let me know next time!
    PV

  • 16 years ago

    by Erika

    OMG i REALLY like it alot... great job.. I haven't been on, written, or read anything in like FOREVER I guess I was trying to put this part of my life in the past... it's depressing, but i really like your poems gosh you're soo good at writing!! Hope to hear from you soon!

  • 16 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    I like it alot.
    it reminds me of songs that my favorite band sings.
    tehy are called Rehab.
    they write all kinds of songs about things like this.
    keep it up i look forward to reading more of your poems.
    <3
    Sparkxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I got bored, but it's obvious this poem means a great deal to you. You can easily picture everything happening, but it got repetitive for me after a while. Still, I've read much much worse.

    L.x

  • 16 years ago

    by Datenshi

    I do believe that in your subconcious mind you wrote this poem for me!
    It suits me rather well, don't you think?
    xD
    love you <333

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    Dang this is good,
    enjoyed readding it
    very unique
    like the style
    well done