I Have Survived

I love the words u use in ur poems. The way everything flows together is just amazing. of course im rating this a 5/5

Another great poem, Great rhime, Great flow,
Love the poem, Very deep, Very sad story,
5/5

Wow that is intense, I am so sorry for what you had to go through, but its excellent how you can write with such honesty and strength. You are truly a strong and talented person, stay that way! 5/5

~jas~

OMG Steph! I'm so sorry!!! This was a sad but beautiful poem. I only found 3 mistakes:

Finaly im ready for my life to begin -Finally* I'm*

Although i still strugle, but i have survived -I*

You did an amazing job at rhyming and flow, it was beautiful Steph. Again I'm so sorry..

Excellent Poem

5/5

-btw I have a new poem Footprints if you would read it I'd really appericate it. Thanks Babe-

That was absolutely awesome. I think that it flowed extremely well, and the words were so powerful, every line showed pure emotion. a very sad poem indeed but one that was beautifully written
well done
xxxxxx