Superb...an excellent poem after a very long time indeed...!

I can relate to a tragedy like this as we have suffered one in our family as well. Although your life will never be the same, I am happy you found the strength to move on! Good luck to you. Keep writing, poetry is a good outlet for your feelings. 5/5

O wow, i'm glad you're ok now... that was a great poem i really loved it. wonderful flow and rhythm and wording great job 5/5

Wow! I'm glad you're alive and well! As for the poem, I thought it was great! The flow was smooth! Very well-written! Though, a few things I'd like to point out:
"Although i still *strugle* (struggle), but i have survived"
-spelling mistake, perhaps just a typo.
-and I thought you should capitalize your "I"'s it gives it much more emphasis cos it's YOU who's talking! ;)

Great poem! I loved it!
Always be safe!
5/5

Very good. Very strong. I've never experienced anything that bad in which I had to get over, but the poem was great. I'm glad to finally hear about someone moving on and not dwelling about things

Wow, I love you're poem and it's a great deal you dare to tell and write what happened to you
Keep it up!!

5/5

Wow, very emotional and powerful yet all put into a short poem... loved it it was so inspirational. 5/5

That was absolutely awesome. I think that it flowed extremely well, and the words were so powerful, every line showed pure emotion. a very sad poem indeed but one that was beautifully written
well done
xxxxxx

OMG Steph! I'm so sorry!!! This was a sad but beautiful poem. I only found 3 mistakes:

Finaly im ready for my life to begin -Finally* I'm*

Although i still strugle, but i have survived -I*

You did an amazing job at rhyming and flow, it was beautiful Steph. Again I'm so sorry..

Excellent Poem

5/5

-btw I have a new poem Footprints if you would read it I'd really appericate it. Thanks Babe-

Wow that is intense, I am so sorry for what you had to go through, but its excellent how you can write with such honesty and strength. You are truly a strong and talented person, stay that way! 5/5

~jas~

Another great poem, Great rhime, Great flow,
Love the poem, Very deep, Very sad story,
5/5

I love the words u use in ur poems. The way everything flows together is just amazing. of course im rating this a 5/5