Comments : Whats wronge with me

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow,it's really good honey,especially

    don't know why you love me
    So apart, but I'm in you heart
    Please don't give me a second chance
    As I'd be mad

    those,good job,keep it up and don't bring yourself down,when you need a friend,don't forget i can be....

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    This is beautiful, amazingly heartfelt, and so realistic. The feeling here is so understandable and I can very much relate to the message. I really love this poem. Great job! Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    This is a great, heartfelt and beautiful, yet sad piece. The feelings that are in this poem are understandable and easily related to. This is a great piece. *5/5 - Athame

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Yep i agree good write keep it up best of luck on getting more r/r/c on your poems :-]

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is kind of sad, but there's so much emotion! good job!

    Forever*Yours

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very self pitying poem. I can be nothing but honest and this isn't my type of poem, I guess just personally the subject doesn't appeal to me.
    It was good yeah, just not for me, sorry.