Comments : Picture in a Frame

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Rachel,
    I was crying as I read your beautiful touching poem. This is so sad and yet so beautiful. Excellent job!

  • 10 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Wow this is really sad...it made me cry... i love this poem keep doing the great job

  • 10 years ago

    by lexie

    This was written so beautifully.it shares the pain of losing a loved one like so many have.that pain was put into such lovely words for such a hard thing.i know what its like to have just a picture.everyday i see his picture,and it hurts.but the pain does get easier,little by little.beautiful work.5/5
    --lexie

  • 10 years ago

    by emptysole

    One word POWERFUL i loved it keep it up u just been added to my favs=]
    great job

  • 10 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    This is really sad! just remember that God has a plan...even when we don't understand it...HARD i know but what else can we do but pray. YOu are very talented!! thank you for your comment!! God bless-Erica

  • 10 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow this was really really good. i liked the idea and the wording was perfect. there isnt anything id change about this! the detailing! 5/5. the flow. 5/5. overall-lol 5/5. excellent work:)

  • 10 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow, touching poem, nicley written!
    The rhyming is absolutly perfect!! awsome work! definatly a 5/5 From me!
    Love Steph

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert

    Very touching and well written.

    good job
    x rob

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    This is one of the best poems i've read of yours..
    The words, the tone, it was impeccable. An incredibly moving piece
    Keep writing!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    This is my favorite poem by you Rachel! Absolutely beautiful! It captures the loss of a loved one perfectly. Flawess rhyming, flow, wording, feeling....it has it all.
    I give it a 10!

  • 10 years ago

    by john graver

    Great write. I enjoyed this one. sad and beautiful all in the same breathe. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, this was gorgeous! absolutely terrific! ok, so i read your post in the competition area, and it gave me an idea, could i set up a competition called picture in a frame plz? since its the name of your poem, i thought i just had to ask!

    did i say - i love your poem! good job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow, Rachel. i loved that and i could see your pain and also the pain of Cindy's. You are so talented and your poems come from deep in your heart. keep writing such beautiful poetry.
    love Tara-Kay

  • 10 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Really good. No my poem wasnt for a contest. But you can enter in my {[[Titled Contest]]} its in contests n that. I think youd do good!

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    This is beautiful! Wow. I can't even begin to say a word on how amazing this was. Just keep up the wonderful work! God bless 5/5

    ~Tay

  • 10 years ago

    by Rona

    I loved this poem! The way you wrote it was excellent and the flow was very smooth! It was just amazing!
    5/5 =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

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    That was amazing. Truely, the storyline, the flow, the rhyming, everything about it was written so well. It's full of emotion, i love to see that in poems. Excellent, i really enjoyed reading it. =] 5/5 Definately.

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sad, but so beautifully written...a real pleasure to read.
    I loved the imagery used in this.
    Excellent work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Beutifully written....

  • 10 years ago

    by Leanne

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    A sad but beautiful poem, absolutely flawless!!
    5/5