This was written so beautifully.it shares the pain of losing a loved one like so many have.that pain was put into such lovely words for such a hard thing.i know what its like to have just a picture.everyday i see his picture,and it hurts.but the pain does get easier,little by little.beautiful work.5/5
This is really sad! just remember that God has a plan...even when we don't understand it...HARD i know but what else can we do but pray. YOu are very talented!! thank you for your comment!! God bless-Erica
Hi, this was gorgeous! absolutely terrific! ok, so i read your post in the competition area, and it gave me an idea, could i set up a competition called picture in a frame plz? since its the name of your poem, i thought i just had to ask!
did i say - i love your poem! good job!
11 years ago
by Tara Kay
Wow, Rachel. i loved that and i could see your pain and also the pain of Cindy's. You are so talented and your poems come from deep in your heart. keep writing such beautiful poetry.
That was amazing. Truely, the storyline, the flow, the rhyming, everything about it was written so well. It's full of emotion, i love to see that in poems. Excellent, i really enjoyed reading it. =] 5/5 Definately.