Comments : Under Your Spell

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    The flow is good, rhymes well, Very nicely done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Aure

    Much of emotion, makes sure that guy doesn't hurt you again

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey great job on this one. very heartfelt good use of words in this one also. lot of emotion. good job xx

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Another greeat one.. but i like this one a lot more than the first

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow! i thought this was great...and so true for some people..good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    What a beautiful flow, word use, meter. Just an incredible poem. Great possibility to be a finalist.
    ♥
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    If there's one memory I don't want to lose,
    It's the feeling that I had when I was with you.

    You mean so much to me, but you're fading away,
    I'll give up everything to just have you one more day.

    i love those lines!!!! that is awesome that he asked you out!!!!! 5/5

    xoxo kisses