Comments : MEDICATE

  • 17 years ago

    by beautifully_broken_tears

    Dont worry most of its metaphorical, like i've only done pot once its a metaphor

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is good cuz its short but still kind of tells u stuff bout u

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Thank you for your comments, I love your work as well! great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    Damn deep dude, seriously good one...dark at the same time...you should aim at writting dark love poems, it may suit you...

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    For such a short and simple poem, it has a lot of depth indeed
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Yo did you see that picture of
    gem's profile

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    Yes, "the dentist" & "cold rain" are real. thank you for the comments cy. u think i'm good-well i think the same about you. your poems are outstanding. i gave you a 5 for all of them. you're top on my favorites! keep 'em coming! you've got a gift.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Though it was short, this poem was excellent in its abruptness and how it was straight to the point. good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Crying_Angel

    Short and humbly sweet. Great writer. You have to write more and keep me posted. Brilliant stuff... Read up on my new ones. Drop of Death and a one that makes you think(Breathe to Death) <--- Analyze that poem for a hidden message :)

    -=[Crying_Angel]=-

  • 17 years ago

    by Love Panda

    I like this-sounds alot like my life.

    very well done

    october xx

  • 17 years ago

    by unkmown

    Okey dokey i wont do that no more than with the words
    thanks for the tip!
    and this a rilly good short poem
    I <3 it

  • 17 years ago

    by Yo baby momma

    Y do u gotta make them so sad?? they almost make me cry!!! but yea.. i really do like this one actually its really short and has lots of meaning and it almost seems as if your there with them ans understand what they go through and i know we dont know each other but do u gotta myspace??? i think we should be friends...u seem really cool!!

  • 17 years ago

    by panicked life

    Thanx for all your comments, they help me alot... Short n sweet, thats the way I like it.. keep um comen and keep up with the comments, thanx for a great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfectly Imperfect vaney

    Short...but so to the point. lol loved it...another 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    I dig it.

  • 16 years ago

    by FindingGestalt

    I love it and thanx for the coments...I was in that place in life not to long ago and now ur poem really speacks to me

  • 16 years ago

    by FindingGestalt

    Ahhh! *speaks...lol my brain doesnt function properly this late at night

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Still beautiful even if it is shorter.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Your words stabbed me in the heart. so brutally true... i have and am dealing with the same thing =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Jaimee

    I like this because it's so short, but has such a powerful meaning.

    Wonderful job.
    5/5