She lives only in winter

by BECCA lessTHANthree   Jan 7, 2007


She lives only in winter
Even under summers sun
She's re-living every moment
When she thought he was the one

She lives only in winter
Getting frozen in this time
Steeling the future from her life
And getting punished for her crime

She lives only in winter
Away from the springs rain
Away from heartbreak summer
And all of autumns pain

She lives only in winter
In a world that is unsure
In a world of make-believe
And a world where he loves her

She lives only in winter
Cause she cant bare to feel
The truth of her depressing loss
The truth; it's all to real

She lives only in winter
Even under summers sun
She's just re-living moments
When she thought he was the one

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    Nice poem! Love It!!

  • 16 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Such strong images, i loved this. it really got me thinking about what love can do to you. thanks for sharing x

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I loved how you used seasons to describe the pain. I believe each season contains a feeling that you don't feel in another season, literally. In winter, you're always happy, and cuddly.. And, this poem proves that. :D

    You did a great job, I absolutely loved this poem. I think its' one of your best because of how it's worded and the emotions it gives to the readers.

    Keep it up, hun.
    <3 Teria.

  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    This is sooo good!!

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww, that was so sad, so sweet though. i could really feel the pain the character was going thru. well done once again!
    much love and many kisses,
    bex