Hey u must be on a role or something because you always seem to have a new poem lol
this one i must say is and always will be one of my favourites good job!

I love this poem, you did a great job on it, thanx for all the comments on my poems 2, means heaps! keep writin, you rock!
___XOX

Omg i love this poem really nice work. o and u said u were gunna write at least 1 poem a day?!?! dang boy that's a lot of poems! well keep up the raaaaaaaaaaad work bro

David,
This is a really excellent write. You have done a great job I have really enjoyed the way you put the colors and meanings of the heart. What a excellent poem.

Very unique. I like the metaphor.
I found a typo "no" should be "know"
Other than that, nice job.

Thanks for that comment! I honestly needed it. I don't get that too often. So from deep down in my heart, thank you. And this poem of yours really moves me a lot. 5/5

This is a very good poem david, great flow, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep it up, these are good!!!

Excellent! I loved how you wrote this poem. I thought it was very well-written! And I loved the last stanza! Great job!
5/5

This is beautiful. The storyline is clever, i've never read a poem on this topic, and you kept me interested the whole way through. The end wasn't what i was expecting, which i always like to see in a poem. Very unique. Keep it up. =] 5/5 Definately.

Tammie

I loved this.
I thought it was beautifully written and I really enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme.

Nice poem i really like it 5 Mandz

Wow! I have never read a poem about a key, and if i were to read another I doubt it would be as good and descriptive as yours just was! wow! this is amazing! 5/5

This is excellent, i think i might have to steal ur idea of posting a poem a day! this poem uses a great extended metaphor. well done.

Seems from the heart. Really like it.
Hebe

Like the key and the different colours

Unique...how did you come up with this? Excellent David...thought provoking.....5

This poem is good. i like it a lot/.

Wow...Nice poem. I love the depth to it. It fell together really well. The last part really got me! 5/5

~Shae

Beautiful job, I liked how you related it to a skeleton key. Keep it up

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
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I want to tell you you should have made a copy :P
this poem was amazing, i dont often read poems about they key to someones heart.
and i like how you gave so many examples of wondering what the key looked like. as if you didnt know.
great write
5/5