Comments : Key

  • 10 years ago

    by kiara

    Hey u must be on a role or something because you always seem to have a new poem lol
    this one i must say is and always will be one of my favourites good job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    I love this poem, you did a great job on it, thanx for all the comments on my poems 2, means heaps! keep writin, you rock!
    ___XOX

  • 10 years ago

    by heather

    Omg i love this poem really nice work. o and u said u were gunna write at least 1 poem a day?!?! dang boy that's a lot of poems! well keep up the raaaaaaaaaaad work bro

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    David,
    This is a really excellent write. You have done a great job I have really enjoyed the way you put the colors and meanings of the heart. What a excellent poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very unique. I like the metaphor.
    I found a typo "no" should be "know"
    Other than that, nice job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Thanks for that comment! I honestly needed it. I don't get that too often. So from deep down in my heart, thank you. And this poem of yours really moves me a lot. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem david, great flow, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep it up, these are good!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rona

    Excellent! I loved how you wrote this poem. I thought it was very well-written! And I loved the last stanza! Great job!
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is beautiful. The storyline is clever, i've never read a poem on this topic, and you kept me interested the whole way through. The end wasn't what i was expecting, which i always like to see in a poem. Very unique. Keep it up. =] 5/5 Definately.

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.
    I thought it was beautifully written and I really enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mandz and Aly

    Nice poem i really like it 5 Mandz

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow! I have never read a poem about a key, and if i were to read another I doubt it would be as good and descriptive as yours just was! wow! this is amazing! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is excellent, i think i might have to steal ur idea of posting a poem a day! this poem uses a great extended metaphor. well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    Seems from the heart. Really like it.
    Hebe

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Like the key and the different colours

    Unique...how did you come up with this? Excellent David...thought provoking.....5

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This poem is good. i like it a lot/.

  • 10 years ago

    by Shae

    Wow...Nice poem. I love the depth to it. It fell together really well. The last part really got me! 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 10 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful job, I liked how you related it to a skeleton key. Keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by oksana

    I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
    <3

  • 9 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I want to tell you you should have made a copy :P
    this poem was amazing, i dont often read poems about they key to someones heart.
    and i like how you gave so many examples of wondering what the key looked like. as if you didnt know.
    great write
    5/5