This is beautiful. The storyline is clever, i've never read a poem on this topic, and you kept me interested the whole way through. The end wasn't what i was expecting, which i always like to see in a poem. Very unique. Keep it up. =] 5/5 Definately.
I want to tell you you should have made a copy :P
this poem was amazing, i dont often read poems about they key to someones heart.
and i like how you gave so many examples of wondering what the key looked like. as if you didnt know.