Comments : Valentine's day letter

  • 10 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, i finally got the time to do all outstanding comments, yay, i like this poem, its so sweet! aww

    Narc xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    I really like this poem. its like hallmark giftcard kinda good! lol :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Tess Tjasink

    Thats so cute! i really loved that poem!! well well done! xox

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is a perfect poem that s written nicely. I luv it great job

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    I think this a very good poem becca, just capitalize the i's, great flow, i give it a 5/5!!! love your poems, keep it up!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Doesnt matter

    Aww.. is this for lee

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is a really sweet poem written from the heart, i'm glad you have somebody who means so much to you, excellent job 5/5 P.S. coffe just isn't the same without cream I hope you always have it to put in. take care xo

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwwwwwwwwww this is so sweet...i love it.. good job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Never URs

    Your poems are really good! they're really heartfelt and you have alot of talent, will you please comment on mine?

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Sweet dedication with a funny ending!LOL

  • 10 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I loved the first three stanzas in this. The flow was excellent. Remember to always capitalise your 'I's though.

    The fourth stanza was going well, but the flow was ruined since it was only three lines, and it kind of made me wonder if it was actually the end, since it didn't really seem like an ending.

    Overall though - good write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    The ending kind of confused me, it must be something that i don't get. other than that, i did like this overall.

  • 10 years ago

    by Taylor

    I think thats a good title. On valentines day, all you can think about is that one person. All you can feel is love. I liked it, to say the least. I'm sure whoever got this letter was pleased.

  • 10 years ago

    by elektra

    It was well.you make love actually sound worth while

  • 10 years ago

    by David Wallace

    Passion is real and as long as you feel that way about another than the possibilites are endless. if u get a chance please rate some of my poems

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    I can really relate to this one, i liked the emotion flowinmg throughout the piece.
    And in england 'cos' is an acceptable substitute for 'cause' cos it has a different pronounciation and tone.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh so pretty

  • 10 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is like the cutest poem i've read in a long time, great job! it made me smile. again, very emotional, but i know exactly how you feel!

    Forever*Yours

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Another beautiful poem. This was so full of love and very discrptive. I loved the last stanza it really wrapped every thing up.Excellent!

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nice, just like your other poems. I liked it. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe