This is a really sweet poem written from the heart, i'm glad you have somebody who means so much to you, excellent job 5/5 P.S. coffe just isn't the same without cream I hope you always have it to put in. take care xo
I can really relate to this one, i liked the emotion flowinmg throughout the piece.
And in england 'cos' is an acceptable substitute for 'cause' cos it has a different pronounciation and tone.