I like this one...similar to mine yet also different.
I think the flow is go0o0od on this one!

Wow. Miscellaneous eh? Couldn't choose where to put it.. I think either life, society or sadness, depression. You did a great job on this. You put so much discription in it I could see it all in my head. You flow was perfect. I didn't find anything that jumped. Your rhyming was wonderful, nothing seemed forced. You did a wonderful job on this.

Great Write

5/5

P.S. Thanks for the comment :)

='( this poem reminds me of my uncle he lost all his kids to a fire on his birthday about 10 years ago he has no REAL place to call home he kinda just wonders around this poem is sad but in a good way nice work

Noelle