Family (sedoka)

by Leanne   Jan 10, 2007


Warmth and happiness
Trustworthy, special people
Friends who will always be there

Strong relationships
Their bonds are unbreakable
Loyalty means everything.

*For a contest*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dana

    Awww so lovely! I never could write a sedoka...so this one is awsome! It's so true and just plain lovely! 5/5 from me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was very good, i've never tried doing this kind of poem, but you seem to have mastered it well.
    well done
    xxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Family is so important to have, no matter what happens family is always there. great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I wish I wrote this..I am sooooo stuck for the second round of this contest *makes angry face* hahaha
    I liked this, I thought the last line was really powerful.