Ace!!!!

I liked this one it somewhat reminded me of a music video jut the way it was described nice job!

Man that was really really good. I mean truly wonderful. Ilike you style 5/5 By the way for this one I am adding you to my favorites

The only really poignant thing about this one was the energy in the last half dozen lines. Not even just the caps, but the repetition, etc. I don't know... it was a little sad for me, but I can see the effort in it. It's good, but not one of my favourites. 4/5