I (Pleiades)

by Anonymous Angel   Jan 11, 2007


I'm not suppose to be sad,
I'm not suppose to feel bad,
It is OK for me to cry,
I'm glad I could say goodbye.
I know you will watch over me,
I know you will see that,
I won't forget you, that's too horrible to do.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    Definitely not bad, but it didn't really grab my attention. I don't really know how to help you with that, at least on this one. Like I said, it's not bad, but I think you could have made it much more powerful if you used a little more description, or just more descriptive or specific words.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This sounds like it's written straight from the heart, with great flow and raw emotions.
    There are too many repetitions for my taste, but other than that, good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this is a good poem. I totally loved it. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I've never seen or even heard of this type of poetry. I think you did a good keeping to it. Though, it seems rather simple, with title you chose and the words begining each line. Still 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked this poem. It gave me an idea for one of my own. I liked the flow and the word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

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