Footprints

by Brittney Follett   Jan 11, 2007


It's kinda funny really, I was sitting in art and this came up after Aryn, my friend, said like.. 'I wanna do somethin' with stars...' I hope it makes you smile like it did for me. [I know its 'skys']
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Footprints

We walk along, hand in hand,
Leaving footprints in the sand.
Watching sunsets, near the sea,
Always and forever, you and me.

Leaving footprints in the mud,
Honey, baby, you're my stud.
Stealing kisses in the rain,
No more suffering, no more pain.

Leaving footprints through the years,
When other footprints disappear.
Gazing at the lovely stars,
Knowing this life is always ours.

Staring at your wrinkled face,
We're through this life, won the race.
I see the love, inside your eyes.
We leave with footprints in the skys.

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  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    This is gorgeous! I absolutely LOVE it! The imagery is amazing and the rhyming is excellent.

    Ally. x

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very touching and beautifully written, with a lot of emotions within. You created great atmosphere through the poem.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -Leaving footprints through the years,
    When other footprints disappear.
    Gazing at the lovely stars,
    Knowing this life is always ours.-

    Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Honestly, that was really good. I remember the first time I felt love like that. the flow was great, the emtion was strong, and the word choice was wonderful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really loved this poem!! it made me sad kinda because I'm going through something thats reminding me of this.. I loved this poem you have great talent

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    I know I already commented this. but aww.
    it's so good. espesh that i love the beach and i think it's so romantic and that at the end they win the race. :D
    makes me smile :D

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