I enjoyed this poem. Although at times I found that the rhyming seemed a bit forced, the line fitted in nicely. I love the last two lines, they end this nicely written peice strongly. It's good to read a poem on a different point of view to do with love, not just wanted love, but rejected love. I like it. =] Nice work. And I'd like to just say thanks for the comment you did on my poem, I really appreciate it. 5/5 For this. =]

Tammie

Kiara, Tammie took my words! haha...no but I do agree with her your rhymes (at times) seemed a little forced which through off the flow a bit. But I really enjoyed this because it reminded me of a movie...Lovers, where one has lost feelings for the other yet when he kisses her she can't resist herself to kiss back...good story line, I liked, I liked!
Chelsey

This poem brings back bad memories for me, i cant comment im sorry, it has good flow and great wording, im soo sorry but thats all i can say :'(

Sad and lovely! Every word is appealing in many ways! 5/5

Really really nice poem!
love the use of words... and they way you expressed your feelings... keep it up always 5/5 :)

AHHH OMG OMG! i fell in love w/ this poem! really great job!!!!!!