Comments : The Long Goodbye

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem it is a awful feeling to say good-bye to someone you love so much. Your love for your nan is so strong she will always be with you. Thinking of you Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Omg that was really sad. im sure ur nan is so proud of u! it was a very touching piece. very well written/ xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    But I don't want to see you live like this
    So with one last 'I love you' and a goodbye kiss
    I'll miss you so much but I just want you to know
    I love you Nanna... and it's ok to let go
    ^^^
    Gem this last stanza brought tears, it really did.
    I am sure so many people can relate to certain parts of your poem. But I think it is the last stanza that will help pull many people through the sorrow.

    A heart touching piece Gem, and your emotional sadness is felt through-out.

    Take care deary
    You and your Nan will be in my prayers sweets.

  • 17 years ago

    by SaraH_*

    Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a touching dedication to your nan. It helps us to find comfort when we lose someone to know that they will no longer be suffering. I bet your nan is very proud of you. Very heartfelt piece. Nice job, straight from the heart!

  • 17 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    This is amazing..i love it so much..it is quit inspiring to me!...
    you are true and great writer..keep writing..
    i hope every turns out better than you expect it to...
    though life is never what we want it to be, bad things always turn out to have good effects...

    but i hope you can find a way to be with her. Good luck fellow writer.

    ~Shannon~

    If you have time check out some of my poems. Thanks!

    ~la vie boheme~

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Beautiful poem Gem. I completely understand what you're going through. I lost my uncle to cancer a few years ago. I hope you get to say a meaningful goodbye to her. Good luck sweetie.
    xoxo

    P.S. My life seems so messed up ever since Jake left. I'm not together at all.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow hunni i know how you are feeling, i had to let my uncle, my great grandma and some other people go in my family. stay strong since i know your nan will be so proud of you. and remember if its her time to go she is in a better place and she is your gardian angel. you are an amazing writer and you put lots of emotion into your writing its amazing.
    5/5
    -chelseaa;

  • 17 years ago

    by SaraH_*

    Thnks for your coment!
    and im sorry for my mistake but that was because im portuguese and i dont speak english so well :(
    by the way ur poems are great!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Awwwww. I'm sorry you have to lose her. I know all too well what it is to lose someone very dear. It's always best to simply be happy they aren't in pain anymore when the time does come. My heart goes out to you in this. Awesome poem, very heart renching.

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    I realize letting go is hard but u r right that it has to be done this poem touched me deeply.

  • 17 years ago

    by sly

    I love your poem, it is great, look at mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ I hope you can, and you'll see your Nan again. It'll just be awhile before you go to heaven too +.+

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Its not a goodbye but a see you later :)) you're hurting but this isint the end :)) the poem is amazing the emotion really shines thru it shows the close bond, shes going but she knows you're strong and you'll be just fine :)))) even i know that ;))))))

  • 17 years ago

    by jay

    Hello...this is so touching, it really is a tough time to say goodbye to someone you want to be around forever, but if you keep in mind that God knows wut he is doing and that his plan is always right, then, your heart will be eased a little, you have my prayers, and love, take care and if you ever wanna talk you know where to find me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tweety

    I think that was one of the most sweetest thing but at the same time one of the hardest things to say to the one yu love

  • 17 years ago

    by tHe aPpReNtIcE

    I love this poem it actually made me cry...i know how you feel my god mother died few months ago and i have loved her very much...you are right the best thing is to let go...in this poem i can see the love wich you had for her...i also have a poem for my god mother...(just in case you dnt believe me)

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Very touching i wrot4e one for my aunt too..its called the Funeral Of Hearts..again great stuf im speechless

    lis

  • 17 years ago

    by katie

    Wow what a great poem it really touched me i like it alot keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by beautifulxhate

    Hey ur poem is rlly great... wud u mind commenting on mi writtin pieces just search for the author 'beautifulxhate' i got a fair few hope u like