Great poem! i love the overall meaning, it's great that you could write something about this! ur an amazing writer!! 5/5!

*Shawte*

Very true thoughts, written greatly

I thought this was beautifully penned. Thought provoking, interesting and well put together. I do enjoy your work....~~~smiling~~~ 5/5.

What a interesting write. You have a way of making one think after they have read your words. excellent job! Take Care Cindy

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

AHH im so jelous.. your poems friggen ROCK! .. lol.. anyways.. really really wonderful job with this.. great flow and good word choice.. a lot of thought when into this poem and it shows.. spectacular write

Very nice =) very enjoyable,5/5

This piece is awesome. You have yet again penned an excellent piece. In fact, this piece seems to be a perfect piece, or as close to one as it can get.