Grow Old With You

by BECCA lessTHANthree   Jan 17, 2007


Lying here
On your floor
There's nothing that
I could want more

Than being here
So close to you
In love so great
In love so true

I hear your heart
It's every beat
and every sound
Surrounding me

I see your face
A memory
Of you becoming
Part of me

I feel your breath
I'm in a daze
So magical
Close to your face

I smell your scent
So embracing
Wonderful...
And breathtaking

I taste your lips
Touching mine
I am floating
On cloud nine

And I can't wait
Please know it's true
I want to
Grow old with you

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  • 17 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Beautiful flow
    beautifully written
    i love the message
    i love how the words
    were like puzzle pieces
    they belonged to eachother
    so very very very well written
    i definatly dug it

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww. this was soo sweet! the words were simple, yet perfect. you said all that was needed to say. great work babe
    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is another beautiful poem of yours. i know a lot of people who r in love would feel like that. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This poem was filled with love... loved this stanza

    "I feel your breath
    I'm in a daze
    So magical
    Close to your face"

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    I liked it, but there were no details. Try to add some length onto your lines and it will be much more effective. And some of the rhymes seemed forced. Lol hate to also point it out, check your grammer (Apostrophes, etc.)

    All in all, pretty nice.

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