Come back

by Kaila   Jan 17, 2007


The most beautiful
Hazel brown Iâ??vv'eever seen
Better then blue
Better then green
Dark brown hair
Pushed back
Against the sides
Of your angelic face
And inside that smile
My heart has a rapid race
No one knows
What I feel inside
When I see you down the hall
For the very first time
And no knows how to
Hold you like I do
With each passing moment
Until the days through
And then the day we said goodbye
Iâ??vevever felt emptier deep inside
Tears like the pacific ocean
I cried for you
Iâ??m just wondering did you cry for me too
I guess Iâ??ll never know
How much you truly cared
Because now theres no more chances
No time to spare
Are you happy with her
Does she know what to do
When you get upset
Or are feeling down and blue
I am the one you need
So baby please
Come back to me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Beautiful. Clear, precise, to the point. But still so well written. The flow was pretty good! A little shaky but possibly only because of the way I read it.

  • Sad, but a bit confusing. For some weird reason, there were words bunched up together. I like it though. I'll still give it a 5/5.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by xFadedxForeverx

    Very Good. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job on your poem. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This was a very nice read. it sounds like a new blossoming love, yet there is a little bit of heartbreak. i liked it. 5/5