Really good .... i love the repeating of your 4 lines ... it sticks in my head and makes me think about what is said.

I love this poem, and echo it, and am also so sad because i know you and wish this isn't what you felt.
Why don't you know what i see? Cos then you would know you are amazingly beautiful and absolutely vitel to me.
Brooke xx

A very powerful ending to a poem that so many of us can relate to. Very well written