This has a really good rhyming scheme, and it flows brilliantly. Welldone. A great use of wording.

Brad

Yet another great poem,
so i havent commented for ages.
( i should check my favorites more offen!!!)
the rhyme scheme is great and it flows well.
love it, love it, love it!!!

I really feel this poem and can relate to it.
it very beautifully written.
well done!!!
5/5
kat-x-