This is an amazing poem and it's all to real for me, i know the exact pain your going through, excellent job 5/5

This is a superb piece of work. Deep, and touching, full of emotion. Absolutely extraordinary job. I particularly liked this stanza:

I hope she can find happiness
The one she lost along the way
She will find someone deserving
Of the love she once had for me

I feel that this really wrapped the poem up nicely, and it also really touches the heart. Wonderful job. *5/5

Great poem. i love it! it has so much emotion , and i can tell where you are comeing from, i've been in the same situation, anyways keep up the great work!

Good write. Loved the last stanza... it truly shows how much you cared for her... as your title suggested "If you love her, let her go"... It's not an easy thing to do but sometimes people don't realize things until it's gone and you'll never know... never say never. 5/5

Oh that feeling is painful. sigh. great poem. you really captured it

Omg.. Darien!!! This was uh-maze-ing!! It flowed really well. & it was so touching. Very heartbreaking though. I hope you're okay..But, this was a beautiful write, Hun. & The title.. is just so amazing.

I love the ending. It wrapped up the poem perfectly.

Beautifully penned, babe.

Bri.x

I love this poem, especially the end, it wrapped up the poem beautifully!! i wish my ex would've wanted me to be happy after he broke up with me... great job though!!!

Forever*Yours

Omg that was such a heartfelt poem. it wwas very well writtn! great job expressing urself! keep it up. xx

I love this title. And the theme. It hurts so much, but you want to make the other happy. So selfless. If it's trust, then you are truly a great person.

This is so heartbreaking,

You know what...people change my friend...
She might have been wonderful...
but someone who hurts as such, is not wonderful anymore.
That person is cruel.

Please take care...
Youve always been there for me...
and i always am too....

God bless you
Dhaval

AW. Dariennnnnn. I loveee it. Srsly :] It was amazing. It flowed really good. & was just so sad, yet so sweet. I loved the last stanza. It deffinitley summed this up perfectly.

Maybe one day we will meet again
And remember the days we shared
We will be living our own life
Alone, married, no one will know

^ I liked this stanza.. but for some reason, i don't know.. but, the last line Kind of.. made me stop & had to re-read it. I just like.. stumbled over it.

In my heart her memory will stay
And I will never forget our love
Even when I've cried my last tear
I will never forget what we were

Time may never heal these wounds
Even when new love has made way
She will never come back to me
And hope is all that I have left

^ THIS IS AMAZING. I LOVEEEE THESE TWO STANZAS. PERFECT.

Beautifully penned.

Bri [x]

Another very nice poem. I think there are people who could relate to it. Another 5/5

Aww.. this is sweet.. i love that you still wish the best for her.. this poem was written beautifully.. it breathes poetry.. again each line is really strong.. you have a talent.. you seem to find the perfect balance of describing your whats going on inside and letting out your thougts of her.. its the perfect balance of talking about the wounds inside you and pain and then talking about how much you miss her and wish the best for her.. overall just another beautiful poem..

o yeah and i LOVE this stanza

"Time may never heal these wounds
Even when new love has made way
She will never come back to me
And hope is all that I have left"

Aaah very touchy.. and lovely. friend it realy touched deep side in my heart. you work is greeat. take care 5/5