Comments : My Little Mermaid

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This is great! Strong! I loved it!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    This is my favorite out of ALL your poems. I loved the analogy and everything..
    gah i just loved it! 5/5
    great flow and rhyme and everything..!