Falling For Love

by David   Jan 19, 2007


Simple.
Such a trivial thing
Is what a emotion
Can quickly bring

Bathed in dim light
It will be such a terrible fright
With a sickly sinister grin on my drooping face
Surrounded by this dull, macabre style place

Thats it
Decision made
Done is done
Debts are paid

Blood just not ever quite dry
Dripping sickly from that moment I die
Shrieks of terror will be heard when its seen
A dastardly vision of murder not so clean

Set now
Mind is too
Last words?
Thankyou.

Tighten the rope let it cut deep my neck
They will see the lipstick from your little peck
Its picture perfect, just like together we are
You may be ahead of me but behind, im not far

I'm falling
Can't touch the floor
Back together we are
Forever more

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A blind emotion is what makes life worth seeing through.
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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This is really deep and has LOTS of emotions... but im not gunna lie, it kinda makes me want to kill myself.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow this is really deep. Feelings just shout from this piece. Great job!Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    That was really good, i love that last line, perfect quote! good writing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    That was really good, i love that last line, perfect quote! good writing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I enjoyed this poem. i felt like i could relate to you in the writing, it was such a wonderful story.

    the only thing about it, is i felt that this part,

    "With a sickly sinister grin on my drooping face
    Surrounded by this dull, macabre style place"

    was somewhat out of place. i felt it was a little wordy, nontheless, i enjoyed your poem. [:

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