Wow, cute.
i enjoyed reading it.
good write. XD

Wow. it was amzing how you wrote that. every word in each stanza were related to eachother, nice work!

Beautiful work, I loved the consistency and the sharpness of your words. Excellent work, keep it up!

Amazing! wow i've never seen a poem like this before! you did such a good job on it. the rhymes were really good!! and i liked the overall idea of the poem! 5/5

~Kristina

This poem was wonderful it was very well written and it said everything, i dont know what else to say except it was excellent 5/5

This poem was soo good. i loved the strucutre and the wording was great. very powerful also. good job writing it. xx

I love this poem!! One of my favorites of yours... I just love the way you wrote it... it has a lot of meaning. Take care :-)

It was simple but still a great poem, I really like the way you rhymed words, I like your style in writing :) please write more ^_^
I enjoyed reading your poems! keep up the good work!