Joe just as beautiful as Part 1, i cannot wait for part 3.

Another great one..keep it up. cant wait for part 3

AWSOME POEMS JOE BOO KEEP IT UP LOVE UR POEMS ARE KOOL AND AWSOME TO READ SRY BOUT THE CAPS JOE

love,
maidison boo

I agree with Sandro! it was just as good as part 1. can't want for part 3. keep the poems coming Joe!

love, Britt

Agree wth all ur poems are realy beautiful to read love thm all...waiting for part 3 now

God bless u

What can I say? another great poem! 5/5 keep it up! ^^

I like the way you showed the uncertainess in this poem. Love does that to alot of us. Great job!

This was as good as the first one. good work and I shall check the part 3 =D

Great job.. i really like this one.. i love how the emotions are mixed.. its trye its more real.. really amazing job!

AWwwww. Another great one. I personally think the flow was a little rocky and could have been done better. But still nicely done.
God Bless 5/5

~Tay

To show your heart to another after having it broken is another way of learning to love again. The first cut is the deepest, a song by Rod Stewart, puts is so simply. Please comment on any one of my poems, I'd appreciate it. Thanks, Michelle =)

Another very emotion filled piece. Bittersweet and deep, this write appears to truly come from the heart. I look forward to reading Part 3. :) *5/5

Again great poem =]. I like the happy ending. Keep it up
*on to read part 3*

I like how this one ended. First it was all sad and seemed so hopeless...but I didn't expect the ending. I love it!

-` Glenduh.

I really love thematic poems that go together. I especially liked how you began this poem the same way as you began the other, thats really awesome. Good job 5/5!

Wow.
Beautiful expression. Awsome twist. Nice "surprise" ending.
Great job
♥
~Stephen White

I really liked this, great job. youre truly talented.

Wow, it's so beautiful. I love emotion. I have to go hug by boyfriend right quick lol. It's well written and the flow is just lovely. Great 2nd to part 1. 5/5

marcella

p.s. after i'm done commenting all who posted for comments i'm comming back to read part3 :]

This one is a lot better than the first one. The rhyming was perfect. And l liked how you showed the difficulty of being in that kind of a relationship. The only critism I have for you is the last verse. All of the rest of them were filled with emotion and power the last verse seemed kind of like a space filler so that it could have an end. I think that needs a little work but other than that amazing. 5/5

Great sequel to the first one. well done and plz keep writing. the way you describe it all is wonderful and magical.

5/5 David