Comments : Loving You (Part 2)

  • 16 years ago

    by Linden

    Breaking, truly heart breaking poem.
    It was so full of emotion, and I loved the first stanza and it just kept getting better.
    Keep up the great work!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    This one is just as good as the last i liked how you started off the poem the same as the last too it was great and a lot of emotion as well :) great poem

    --emz--

  • 16 years ago

    by Hawaiizang3l

    Wow, first it did a 180 in the beginning, and then another 180 at the end....oohh cant wait to read the last part!! :) ((so interesting...))

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Gosh...soo true... long distance relationships are so hard to keep..

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I'm loving your style i love story poems and i love the fact that it continues on, i love the way you repeated everything another great write!...5/5

  • The 1st part was better to me but this one is still good.The flow was better but the 1st one held more emotion in my point of veiw but anyways,great job.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by cicek

    Our righting is soo touching

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    I realy like it , im sure that i will read part 3 nowwwwwwww

  • Love it Caleb Hammett

  • 14 years ago

    by xx

    Another wonderful poem.