I love this poem! my favorite part was the last three lines (no, not b/c it's the end, lol), they really got to me!! great job with this!! 5/5!

Forever*Yours

Excellent job! You did a great job with this form of poem. Loved your word choices. 5/5 Take Care Cindy

Wow. i really really really like this poem. its soo good. i love the title or topic word and how you made everything fit. its just so good.

great job hotthanggggggggggg

Very nicely written. Acrostics are usually hard to make flow, but this was very good.

Peace, Joe

Wow! I loved this poem a lot. The whole idea of it pretty much. It's an amazing acoustic poem.

cella

Beautiful!!!!!!!! And I must say I will remember this poem forever,,,,,, keep up the good work ;)

Great poem. Interesting point of veiw. I like it. My favoret lines are

Inside of a picture, behind what looks real
Nobody knows, how they really feel

Because it is the truth. I personally don't like having my pic taken. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Awww i love this poem. it's great! and so true pictures are deaciving... they always look so happy..

DANG. HOW DO YOU EXPECT ME TO PICK THESE TO PIECES WHEN I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!!! THE LAST LINE WAS REALLLLLL NICE.

I loved this!
The imagery was perfect and the first few lines had me hooked.
I thought the whole piece flowed really well.

I loved this poem, it wasn't as good as your other one. And, the word 'still' was overused. BUT, it was a great poem, and is extremely true. I like doing acrostic poems, I'm not that good at them.. But, you are! You've done a great job with all the ones I've read so far.

:D Keep it up, hun.
<3 Teria.