Hey Joe, very nice once again, just like you and your guitar you and a pen go together well. nce

That was so sad T T

5/5

Omg! Joe this is great! you really love her huh? i'm so sorry joe. i still love you tho! **britt**

Another amazing piece of work..5/5
n sad too

God bless u

Alright is there a part four? Great job on telling your story on poems.

I LOVE IT.
i shall hurt him
& you're an amazing poet
and i love you
and you rock
if you ever need me, im here
and this poem
rocked. like the rest.
ily 5/5 I BROKE A NAIL! ;/

Awwwwwwwwww.. now other words..
Mary

It sounds like you are a kind person not many people could still be there for someone that hurt them, very heartfelt,which is the best a poem can be.

I loved all three parts, Joe. Very well written. You were able to tell a story through a poem. That's pretty cool. =D

~~Spanish (Teres)

A sad story =(... however an excellent poem. This 3 part story was very good so don't stop writing like this ..

Another poem that i can tell comes from the heart.. however it doesnt really have much of a flow.. still its a heartfelt poem and an enjoyable read

All of these poems I read are soo amazing. Keep up the wonderful work.
Thank you for commenting my poem, it meant a lot to me.
God Bless 5/5

~Tay

I actually don't know what to say..

It's one of those poems where you can out your head in it and have it chopped of because everyone is guilty of feeling like this,

Love xx

I liked this piece as well, and I can certaintly see how they all fit together. I love the idea and feeling behind it, and the way you put emotion into the writted word. However, I'm not too crazy about your form.[ I like the way the first stanza repeats though] In the third stanza, having two lines end with 'believe' really threw me off. Also on the last stanza, having two lines end with 'heart broken' had the same effect. I liked the content, but perhaps a better wording choice? *4/5

**written... not writted. Sorry.

Wow. GREAT poem. Idk what else to say except Wow. Very touching. Fantastic job.
-Mel

Gr. Kristen said what I wanted to say. Heh. Anyways, Joe, this poem was the saddest of all. I guess what makes it more sad is that it's all real. I don't know what to say. This was an excellent poem. I really liked it. 5/5

-` Glenduh.

I think as each part comes out, it gets better and better. This part is my favorite! Great job!

Wow what a strong poem! Incredible story line. Love the trilogy. Great write.
5/5
♥
~Stephen white

Wow this is me fav one out of them all. I can just imagine how difficult it would be to have to give relationship advice to someone you love when you know that they are using it on another. The last stanza was my favorite out of them all. Cause even though she's in love with someone else your upset because this someone didnt see what you see in her and then caused her pain. I think almost everyone can relate to this story. so 5/5