There are a couple grammatical errors, but they are not too damaging to this piece. Well thought out, and intruiging. It has a flow that captivates the reader and adds emphasis. Nice job.

I dont think the grammer errors matter when its such a good poem!!!
very good!!! keep it up!!!

Very nice sentiments in this piece. I like the overall feel of it....romantic and apologetic.

I am sorry my angel,
I am confessing my guilt tonight.
With a promise,
To make every second of your life
Bright.

The last verse is my favorite. Such heartfelt emotion...beautiful.

Esp. love the last few lines, great work. PLEASE comment as much of my stuff as you can thnxs

lissa

I swear this would make me cry. I don't even know what to say. I'm speechless. This was just amazing. Beautiful write! I love it!!! 5/5!!

-` Liz

Hi
first of all i don't see any gramer mistakes, and even if there is i don't think its such a big issue to how good one can write, and this poem as simple and sweet as it is comes from a heart that feels each word very deeply down and probebly mean alot to him as well as idea behind this poem.
i truely loved it, acctually i love every single one of your poems, becaues when you write it, you give it this air of yourself that no matter how much one tries not to care, but as iam sure alot of your readers are , get very lost in it...
great job,,,,and trust me she is lucky, and alot of girl iam pretty sure are jelous of her.lool..
looking forward to more poem by the favorite poet of all time

Aw I love this poem so much. I wish a guy would say that to me lol. Anyway I think it's very well written and it definitley gets to you.

cella

I really liked this one. well done 5/5

A nother beautiful poem. I loved it and I know how it feels. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Ooo i love that one, great job of course!!! 5/5

Awwwww this is amazing and beautiful!!
Wonderful useage of words and great flow of the poem. The rhythem was great! Keep up the great work!
God Bless 5/5

This is really good. Goran I loved the emotion in it. 5/5

Wow. i felt like tearing. that is so sweet, goran. keep up the awesome skill you have. the poems touch me. 5/5.

Awwwwww........and dude!! didnt u say a while back tht u werent goin to write anymore...u lie!! lol and by lookin at ur awards ur famous!ur lik a celeberty! well another awsomer poem by u..i can relate cuz im gettin over someone......a 5/5 for me

This poem was absolutely beautiful...it almost took my breath away and made me sad and wistful. Excellent work!

~jas~

Beautiful... i love the style of your writing!! I gave you a 5/5 and i def plan on reading more of you work :-)

Don't know what you did to have to say sorry... but if i was her, i'd be all over you if i saw that... jkjk
seriously though, this is beautiful, these are some things i wished were said to me... dude, this poem almost made me cry!! great job!!

Forever*Yours

I totally agree with fetusboy.

So touching. i love it. i love reading your workk..

Beautiful poem!!