Why I Cry

by Quiet Storm   Jan 22, 2007


Sometimes i don't really know the answer
Sometimes i just can't put it to mind
When i feel like my days are about to end
my urge gets stronger and stronger
to just give up and die
Why i cry
i couldn't tell you
I'm lonely
and i no longer have you
My tears are falling into a flowing river
The one of which you drink
The one in which you bathe
Why I cry
it's because you have caused me great despair
and great heart-ache
That's why i cry

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  • 16 years ago

    by becca

    Such a beautifully written poem! i cqan relate to it so much. specially atm. a beautiful write! xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    I loved it!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by LovingAnnabelle

    That was a really great poem you put alot of emotions into it~ I can really compare to your poem~
    Its great~ Awsome job

  • 16 years ago

    by Colby

    It was good.... i liked it

    but maybe try ryhming more... but it was still good done get me wrong

  • 17 years ago

    by Gone Forever

    That is a great poem..very deep and very thought-out. great job
    :)

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