Comments : Fragile Mindset (Triolet)

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is a clever poem, n u kept to the structure really well without ruining the poem, well done

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Dude i totally love this poem. even though it took me forever to understand it. im a freakin retart!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Unusual style but you did it nicely. thanks for all the comments on my poems and for the placing in your contest. it meant a bunch!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    I love to see poems with difficult styles, this one is beautiful, you mastered the style, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    MM NICE. THE WORD CHOICE OF THIS WAS MARVELOUS!!!!! I REALLY DONT HAVE EXPERIENCE ON THE FORMAT, SO I CANT SAY MUCH THERE.

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This was a good use of the form. I tried using it once, but it didn't turn out all that well.
    I think maybe there were some cliche ideas in this, but just the creative use of form makes it good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. this was superb. i loved the type of poem, i've never tried writing it, but you seemed to have executed it with sheer excellence. wonderful job, once again, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    oOiginal and unique in concept, and a joy to read.
    The wording and flow were perfect.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Great job with this one. I love this type of poem and you did it so well. It had a really good flow. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh. Excellent. One of your best, by far. You're very good with set rhyme schemes [try them more =]].
    I loved the rhyming, the flow, and the story. Not too cliche and the title was very drawing. Great job on this. Definately deserves a 5.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5