Good wright i like this ive been there so many time (and i got the scars to prove it lol) might go reda more of your work now keep it up...

"In the morning we'll regret tonight"

That is my favorite line. I could really get a sense of what was happening in the poem and I really liked it a lot!

Astryd

Excellent job! It is so sad that this is done but so true. It is such a shame that so many people need this to have a so called good time. Instaed of looking for the beauty around them. Good job on this write. Take care Cindy

This is an amazing poem, written so greatly, keep up the great job, you are an amazing writer, a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Wow, I really loved this poem. At this point in my life, this could really be an anthem for myself and for the people around me. It may seem lame, but you captured the essence of the situation with truth and dignity. Excellent job, keep up the good work!

This was beautifully written....i loved the flow of the poem and it was easy to read and enjoyable...you really expressed the topic well and yeah i really thought it was well done xoxoxAlly

Wow, very nicely penned. I loved it. The flow was very good. You are a very talented writter, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Very good i really enjoyed reading it love always linda 5/5

I agree, we do, we say one thing and do another. We give excuses that we can't, we procrastinate and expect someone else will do what we don't.
I liked this piece of prose very much and it gave a good message, however sometimes the wordiness of certain parts put me off. I don't know what it was, but some parts just didn't read well for me...
Also, on the fourth line of the last stanza I think you meant "...life will all come back..." rather than "we'll."

Good poem though, very truthful, sadly.

A very interesting concept in this piece. I loved the emotion and the heart I felt reading this. The flow was amazing, good work.

This is a truthful and hard learned lesson! Sad but comforting in the sense "I am not alone" Very well done!

I can completely relate to this one... i actually wrote a poem about drinking as well.
you did a good job with this poem

I loved this poem its writen so well and it keeps your attention its a great piece of poetry
keep up the great work

I really like that poem the last verse i could compleatly relate to. thanx for that poem

Okay... this is absolutely amazing... iam astonished... 5/5

That is awesome keep writing, you're good..

I liked it kinda confused me but yea i can relate! 5/5

I agreed with every part of this poem, so true its kinda scary lol
Very well written i'd say
5/5

This poem was written so well. It had good imagry. 5/5

This was a wonderful poem...you are a very good writer...you got great poetential...

***ayshley***