Comments : Black Roses and Broken Valentines

  • 17 years ago

    by AinsleySara

    Hii. really good like the way you worded everything had really good flow
    Ainz

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Awww....very sweet poem, nice flow and rhyme. I will do your five comments as I come across five new poems! Sorry I must do it that way, but in a way it's a compliment that I've read so much of your poetry!
    Good job Twisted Heart!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    The flow in this poem is just amazing Jeannie. The words just roll off my tongue as I read them aloud. I think it could be the next top of the charts song ... so you better keep a close eye out ...

    A cupid came and dashed my heart
    giving doubt its due
    A midst the pieces of a soul
    that died from loving you
    Black roses sit upon the stone
    of where my heart once lived
    Now dead within the chambered thoughts
    and so hard to forgive.
    ^^^
    I the reader can feel the emotions set forth through your words in this part.

    Wonderfully penned Jeannie!

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Awesome word usage. nice write

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful poem. I loved this write! Excellent!

  • 17 years ago

    by tiare

    & hearts;

  • 17 years ago

    by tiare

    Tiare
    nice poem u have there is there away u could inspire me well i loved ur poem

  • 17 years ago

    by princesrainbow

    Its realy good........ so if u dont mind who or wat is ur inspiration on making poetries plzzz answer me..... and hey if u have time plzzz check me out ill be waiting

  • 17 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    Hey this is so nice i really like it i gotta add you to my favorite if i already dont have you on there so yea read some of my stuff and add me to yours if you like them! Love always

    Monica aka Mika

  • That deserved more than 5/5 it should get like 100/100 it was so good.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlAcK RoSe

    Great great poeming. Keep writing ur amazing poet.
    take care

    WiLd RoSe

    Please comment on mine. Thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I can not pick a favorite stanza as the piece in it's entirety is a beautifully sad story. Excellent rhythm and rhyme. I enjoy reading your work and this is now one of my favorites! EXCELLENT JOB!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Adriana

    Aweee thats sucha cute and such a sweet poem! 5/5 keep up the great work! and comment back if you ever get a chance! ok! well anyways great poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassandra Wojick

    I really enjoyed reading your poem. awesome job, i wish i could write like that.

  • 17 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Gosh Jeannie! I have goosebumps reading this piece. This is nothing short of a masterpiece - every word hits out with so much power, it's amazing!!

    i'm always in awe of your talent and after reading this, I put you on a pedestal - outstanding!!!

    love and luck
    shobhana

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    The imagery in this...WOW!!! This was was so beautifully written and so sweet. I thought this flowed perfectly and I loved every part of it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, i'm so sory that i only start to comment now! this was a beatufull poem! very well written with excellent emotion! Nice.

    Narc xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    Wow.
    this is so so well written its insane.
    mad props my friend.
    mad props.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    Wow, i dig this one so much, really really well written, you have a lot of talent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Oh, wow! I'm speechless. Very nice dramatic ending, wonderful flow throughout. The imagery created wonderful scenes in my head, magnificient job, once again!