Awe, this was so sad. I loved it. Very well written.

This is a really touching poem, I really feel sorry when I hear things like that whether it happened to or not, it does happen to people in the world and it's so sad. You put it well together, I love the explanation and the ending is great. The whole thing is sad, it brought tears to my eyes, no one could've done a better job.

Wow. I didn't expect this. I thought it would be horrible, with horrible rhyming and stuff. =P But you have proven me wrong.

The emotion in this poem was amazing. It wasn't really emotion on top, but underneath it all is very raw, clear emotion, and it just seeps out. I loved it so much.

The flow I found was a little rocky in places, especially at the beginning and nearer to the end more. Don't try to force your rhymes. A poem can be great without rhymes too. =)

And lastly, I hope this isn't true. If it is, I'll be here to talk to no matter what. Feel free to PM me. =) Great job. Keep it up. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow I don't understand why this doesn't have more votes and comments. This is one of the deepest and darkest of the sad poems I've read. Excellent work!

~jas~

Ok wow, you just made it on my fav's list!,
Very nice, 5/5, Another great poem =)

Wow this poem was amazing it had a lot of emotion i loved everything about it you're a great writer keep it up 5/5

Oh my god.. this poem is amazing. right from the start i got into the poem and can feel the hurt.. that never happend to me b4. i love it. 5/5 keep up the good work

Although it's long this poem keeps you focused all the way through. It's well written and I really like it.

Keep writing :)

Hey i really like this one. ive read a few other of ur and there all good.

xxxx ..::Broken Lullaby::..

Hey, this was a really good poem. so much emotion coming through. it was a really sad write. very well written. keep it up. xx

Wow... I love this poem... it's so sad... very touching though...

Always say your fine,
When people ask questions,
Never let your bruises slip,
Fear of rejection threatens

Try to be the person people think,
Hold your pride high,
For what would people say,
If they knew, at night, you cry?

Those are my favorite lines.. altogether it's amazing... but this part is great because it shows so much emotion! Great poem! 5/5!

This poem is beautifully written. I LOVE IT!!