This was very interesting i luv these 2 lines they just struk me as different but moving
Another lock and key I mistook for a doorway
Another wall for a window

keep it up
5/5

This was beautiful, it was so sweet, it flowed perfectly, (write more like this!)
5/5
gabriella

That was fantastic, it was well written and emotional 5/5

I really loved this poem..very cute! ^.^
This is my fav stanza: "I wonder if you felt my smile on you
The sudden urge to collapse into your arms and wrap my body around your soul
doesn't hold me like it used to
The reminder that I could never have you
Doesn't choke me like before"

I just love how you worded everything..
Just reading your poem gave me a beautiful picture/image in my mind, it was like a masterpeice. Beautiful! BTW thanks for the comment! I am gonna add u as my favorite bc you are so wonderful when you comment! GGod Bless!