Wow someone with consistant meter.
Very well written! Keep it up!

Amazing
-deadbeatromance

Wow in such a short poem you managed to make it so incredible

Very well writen!

I love your peices. Im addicted. Amazing Job!

ELaine

Great poem, it is interesting and very unique. Flow is excellent and wording also. First stanza is the greatest. i like topic too.
Well done,5/5

Im not worried about it being nice.
Its an expression of emotion for the lost of a loved one.
thanks for your comments. xxx