I did the same thing but by accident it finds out wat we were feeling was teenage lust now i feel bad and i hope she gets over me like you are getting over him/her (i dono) im sry it happened. -david

This is very touching, and the words you used are very good, but it is a little cluttered :) but good

I like your poems, there really expressed. And ive wrotten alot more poems, that poem was an old one. lol. I hope to hear from you. Keep up the great work!
-Melly