Hear my cries,

by Anonymous Angel   Jan 31, 2007


Hear my cries,

I cry out,
in the night,
to be saved from this hell ride,

Hear my cries in the night,
please come save me from this lonely fight,
My eyes hurt from all the tears i cried,
Please come save me from this hell ride,

Every tear that i let fall,
when I'm in thrall,
feels like my soul is ripped apart,
I'm dying from the heart,

Hear my cries in the night,
please come save me from this lonely fight,
My eyes hurt from all the tears i cried,
Please come save me from this hell ride,

So come and save me,
when you hear my plea,
I beg you on my knees
come and find me please.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poseur

    This is beautifully written; you did a great job. i really like your technique, your style. keep it up.

    thanks for your comment ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Powerful, with excellently expressed emotions. I can deeply relate to this piece, you filled it with a lot of feelings.
    I like your choice of words here, and the flow that you created.
    Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Aww, thid made me a bit sad =[[ but it's really good. Great job 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    The repitition was nice, not too overbearing. The rhymes were rather simple, but the flow was flawless. You should capitilize your I's as well. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Hey,
    you did a really great job on this poem. The flow was excellent and you put meaning behind it 5/5 <33

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