Beach Tears

by Whisper   Jan 31, 2007


The girl silently sits
Crying in the dark
The tears stream down her face
Every one leaves a mark

Questioning herself
Trying to understand
Wishing someone would hold her
And lift her off the sand

The moon shines down upon her
Shining off the sea
She asks herself silently,
"Does anyone notice me?"

She hears a quiet whisper
Telling her to pray
She closes her eyes and speaks to God
And tells him about her day

"Well, Lord, for one, I cried today
"Cause they just don't understand."
She told him how she dropped her books
And no one lent out a hand

"Lord, all they did was laugh at me
And it made me feel so bad.
Then they walked all over me,
And that's what made me sad."

She told Him about the boys who teased
And the one who hit her hard
She told Him how she lost her lunch
And the girl had made her scarred

She started speaking once again
But someone made her hush
She started feeling happier
It came in such a rush

"My darling child, you must not worry
For I was with you throughout the day.
I know you cried, I know you hurt
But I did not go away."

God layed her down, upon the sand
And wiped away her tears
He calmed her nerves, and kissed her soul
And drained her of all her fears

She closed her eyes and said to God,
"Thank you for all you've done."
She fell asleep and the Lord whispered,
"I'd do it for anyone."

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  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    The poem is more than awesome...I'm touched and impressed...
    The feeling of getting hurt and mistreated by people,is so bad and really hurts inside but all the pain goes away when we go back to God to save us from ourselves and from others.

    Ur poem is so simple and so true...And with a short story,u mentioned the truth and the mighty of God that he is the only saver and the healer of all our suffering...

    Great job...I enjoyed reading it
    Keep up the good work5/5..

  • 15 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    AWWWWWW this is going on my favorites

    it's so sweet

  • 16 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    Amazing quality! and you're younger than me???????? wow, im jealous!!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Stazifer Stazington

    Oh Em Gee Panda!!!
    This poem is so awesome.
    5/5 Deffinatly
    Like, I am speechless so im blabbering on
    But dude, Panda, This Poem Is So Good!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by David Marshall

    Wow.....just wow...Casey that has got to be the best poem you have ever done....i seriously think thats better than most of my poems...no joke...i love this poem...you had great imagry and the point of view with the speaking was amazing, this is absolutely awsome. It would be a three thumbs up if i had three thumbs...but i can only give you two :( but its definatly a 5/5!!! beautiful write casey.