Comments : DARK SIDE

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamica

    I like all of your poems. No, it wasn't a one hit wonder I just don't like putting all of my stuff out there. I've got a few hundred poems. I'll write some more like the one u like pretty soon. I just don't think they're all that great. Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you're trying n/a again, just keep coming back. If works if u work it! I've got faith in you. What is your drug of choice anyways?

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Her name on this site is lisa gindle

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    This was good. i can relate to it well. sorry to disappoint you with my lastest. thanks for being honest. it was just my thoughts. not really a poem, i guess. thanks for reading. 5 for you.

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    Don't take it back. it's ok to not like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gracie Danielle

    I like this one. its...true. thnx 4 the comments on mine.... i would write a longer comment but im @ skool and not allowed on here. Oh, I can be your inspiration for recovery... just dont put me on a petastool... because im not better than u... because im not recovering. Im just a person, i cant heal you... i just tell the truth.

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    Its awesome dude, but just a sugestion..dont hate me for this (i dont like when people do this to me) so this is just a suggestion - "reality where bad is good
    pain is pleasure" change that to "reality where bad is pleasure and good is pain" - dont know just thought it might sound more wierder and darker, but yeh awesome work...keep writting

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamica

    Hey, checked out your wife's poems, they're really good! I can feel her pain. I've always sorta been suicidle. Sometimes I feel like life's just not worth living and this world would be a far better place if I wasn't in it.But that might just be the disease of addiction talking to me. Even if I am clean I still have to live with me. I sometimes feel like I'm a monster and I don't want to scare anyone else or hurt them. talk to u soon.

  • 17 years ago

    by Koriey Korrupted

    Wow...this is really good...
    i think everyone has this special darkside...
    even though they cant see or feel it...
    5/5
    I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by beautifully_broken_tears

    Sorry i'm goin through a slow poem period...

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    Dude the poem sounds super now, i was like "wow", its a killer...dark, deep, rythms...its right on the spot, perfect. keep writing dude.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    We all have a dark side and that's perfectly okay! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Man the dark side---- thats tight, you hit it right on. man your poems are excellent very deep and very moving

  • 16 years ago

    by memorial life

    I liked this one alot especially the last line because its true dark side is all about fullfilling desire and in my life my desire has been drugs. so i dunno i can relate to all your shit and thats whats important about poetry is it says something that a person cant

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfectly Imperfect vaney

    Wow....i've read most of your poems and i've loved everysingle one..but this one stood out for me...i have my reasons..but i loved this one a lot. good job..i'm lookin forward on reading new stuff u write ;)
    ~vanessa

  • 15 years ago

    by Jeanne

    As usual, i love it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    A very deep poem, ive never read anthing sucha s this. wonderful job! keep up the great work. 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by 14th

    I love dis poem!! =D