Deb,
You have done an amazing job on this write. This is on e of the best poems I have ever read. You paint such a vivid picture of a piece of history. ~Clap~ ~Clap~ ~Clap~ Very Well Done!

I love the way you have put pieces of history to rhyme. This is one of the best peoms I have ever read. The imagery is good & the rhythm and rhyme are perfect. Nice to be reminded of those who have lost their lives protecting our great country, not just in recent wars but of those past. EXCELLENT JOB!!!!!! 100/5

Woooooooooooooo nice 5/5 purely nice GO USA.

War is never beautiful....but you have captured history and it fits well....
the word choice is beautiful and thought provoking.. impressive

different from your normal style...

10!!

Wow Debbie, you have a way with words. You are very talented. The flow as well as the structure were both outstanding. Job well done.

Ciao, Joe

F-ing awesome. one of the best writes i've read. flawless.5/5

You did very very very amazing job on this poem i really like this one.

Very nice =)

Very moving

A very well crafted poem

I don't even know how to comment your poems. This was just so amazing. I wish I could say more than that. A trully inspiring write. 5/5.

-` Liz

This is so so effectively written, though i guess u mentioned abt Pearl Habour...i m not sure abt the places...but i really loved the selection of words and the wya u presented the whole incident. U r really a very talented poet.

all the best and take care

Now this was amazing. I found it both original and unique in concept, and the words were written with such beauty and elegance. the imagery you portrayed in this was beautifully captured. there were one or two lines were i thought the flow could be better, but apart from that, beautiful work on this.