Comments : The Brawl Of The Beautiful Birds!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by thing3

    Aww! i luv quails!!

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    I like this poem, good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by *Courtney*

    Hey katster liking the poem it great

    iv got 2 new poems on mine called "Sarcy" and "I saw you" check out 4 me plz hun

    n cya in skl 2moz!!

    xx courtz xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Lenny

    Firstly perhaps 'MOST beautiful of all' for the last line! It needs a most..
    Secondly, and should have been firstly, WOW! What an awesome poem. I agree with the nature category, but it is also amusing! They should allow joint categories on this site. Umm anyway, I liked the story it told. Almost ballad like. And the rhyme was used very effectively unlike most who use it!
    Great job!

    -Lenny

  • 12 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Well i can see that ur quiet fond of doves...
    thats 2 poems i read for you with doves
    great poem....a bit long...but u kept me interested....
    i agree with lenny though...the last line breaks the flow u had going...
    oh and thanks for the reasuring comment...im still new at this...ur comment was inspiring

  • 12 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Hey guys its kat.
    i know the last line doesnt quite flow and ive been trying to change it but the site wont let me!
    doh!
    so thanks for the advice lenny!
    i took your advice!

  • 12 years ago

    by KT Mackey

    I think it's very nice, and very cute too. Imagining birds like that. haha. Great Job

  • 12 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Ok, changed it now...